Thank you very much for having recorded yourselves !!!!!! GREAT EFFORT!!!
To keep improving your pronunciation, it is very good to LISTEN AND REPEAT....you can also record yourselves again and check the difference ;o))) and try to repeat again and again...
Try this, even though it's American accent:
- Daily Listen and repeat- you'll find different sentences everyday
- Pronunciation videos- how to pronounce different sounds
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!